Настроение сейчас - оуууу

Я набралась смелости и выкладываю стихи.
1.заранее извиняюсь за возможные ошибки.
2. критика приветствуется! как с точки зрения грамотности англ. яз, так и с других точек)
3. (!) это стихи не для кого-то, это просто моя идея, пришедшая ко мне ночью некоторое время назад. это трибьют абстрактной персоне.звездочки ставила наугад. правда!!!!!
4.оценяйте)

Вообщем: Song to Say Goodbye:a tribute to **** **********

-You`re one of my mistakes
you didn`t care about me
I`m well aware of how it aches
But you still won`t let me in
Now I`m breaking down your door
To try and save my love to her
Though you don`t like me anymore
*Oh. You`re wrong*
I won`t hurt you! Don`t think so!

-Before our friendship was destroyed
You were always one of those
Who can be my sweet sunrise
And your photos made me cry
It`s all spoiled by myself. Fucking lie.

-You`re a girl of mist and rain
Someone to whom I could devote
But stupid quarrel broke it all
And all I have is just my notes
*About us*
But it was clear for everyone
That we won`t be together!
*Never!*
For what I should control myself?
*I can`t see sense*
So, it`s a song to say goodbye.
My, oh, my!
It`s all spoiled by myself. Fucking lie.

-Before our friendship was destroyed
You were always one of those
Who can be my shining angel
And your notes made me cry
It`s all spoiled by myself. Fucking lie.
It`s my song to say goodbye [x8]

PPS. это переделанная песню Placebo.