Miss_Halfway, мне оригинал, конечно, больше понравился)))
вообще мы учили на 1м курсе стих его, оч красивый тоже)
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Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and, frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

Forbidden_Snowflake, да, мне тоже английская версия нравится больше) Твое стихотворение тоже отличное. У него шикарный ритм.

Miss_Halfway, оо. был один шикарнейший стих, просто шикарнейший, мы по зарубежке проходили. чичас покажу)))
автор Carl Sandburg
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WHAT does the hangman think about
When he goes home at night from work?
When he sits down with his wife and
Children for a cup of coffee and a
Plate of ham and eggs, do they ask
Him if it was a good day’s work
And everything went well or do they
Stay off some topics and talk about
The weather, base ball, politics
And the comic strips in the papers
And the movies? Do they look at his
Hands when he reaches for the coffee
Or the ham and eggs? If the little
Ones say, Daddy, play horse, here’s
A rope—does he answer like a joke:
I seen enough rope for today?
Or does his face light up like a
Bonfire of joy and does he say:
It’s a good and dandy world we live
In. And if a white face moon looks
In through a window where a baby girl
Sleeps and the moon gleams mix with
Baby ears and baby hair—the hangman—
How does he act then? It must be easy
For him. Anything is easy for a hangman,
I guess.

Forbidden_Snowflake, это хорошее по смыслу. Но ненавижу, когда нет рифм.

Miss_Halfway, а я ненавижу рифмы XD
особенно пушкинские

Forbidden_Snowflake, по-моему, хорошая рифма - это приятно)) И стих читается хорошо)

Miss_Halfway, я люблю знаешь, когда чтото такое... что Выше рифмы)))