Le_reve, замечательные переводы. Интересно бы и сюда оригинал поместить, чтобы было видно, как хорошо передан дух стиха Дикинсон.

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Le_reve, замечательные переводы. Интересно бы и сюда оригинал поместить, чтобы было видно, как хорошо передан дух стиха Дикинсон.

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The Daisy follows soft the Sun
«And when his golden walk is done -
Sits shyly at his feet -
He — waking — finds the flower there -
Wherefore — Marauder — art thou here?
Because, Sir, love is sweet!»
«We are the Flower — Thou the Sun!
Forgive us, if as days decline -
We nearer steal to Thee!
Enamored of the parting West -
The peace — the flight — the Amethyst -
Night's possibility»

***

«Doubt Me! My Dim Companion!
Why, God, would be content
With but a fraction of the Life -
Poured thee, without a stint -
The whole of me -- forever -
What more the Woman can,
Say quick, that I may dower thee
With last Delight I own!
It cannot be my Spirit -
For that was thine, before -
I ceded all of Dust I knew -
What Opulence the more
Had I -- a freckled Maiden,
Whose farthest of Degree,
Was -- that she might -
Some distant Heaven,
Dwell timidly, with thee!
Sift her, from Brow to Barefoot!
Strain till your last Surmise -
Drop, like a Tapestry, away,
Before the Fire's Eyes -
Winnow her finest fondness -
But hallow just the snow
Intact, in Everlasting flake -
Oh, Caviler, for you!"


***


«Besides the Autumn poets sing
A few prosaic days
A little this side of the snow
And that side of the Haze -
A few incisive Mornings -
A few Ascetic Eves
Gone -- Mr. Bryant's "Golden Rod" -
And Mr. Thomson's "sheaves."
Still, is the bustle in the Brook -
Sealed are the spicy valves -
Mesmeric fingers softly touch
The Eyes of many Elves -
Perhaps a squirrel may remain -
My sentiments to share -
Grant me, Oh Lord, a sunny mind -
Thy windy will to bear!»

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