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Bliss.

What we can say about bliss?

May be – it is only a kiss?

It may be blind and may be numb,

Sometimes it can be jet or dumb.

It can be precious, it can be trap,

It can be a very long and tender flap.

It can be spirit or a mist,

It can be collision at least.

But if to speak about me –

It inner friction only can be.

Because we lose our control,

Around us we all can roll.

It can be bliss, it can be curse,

It can be little – little horse.

It can be mammal or a wing,

Or only one from hundred link.