Только я вас очень прошу, не судите строго, я уже оч давно ничего особого по англ не писала! если что- помогите исправить))

Talk to me,
I'm almost died.
"I need you"-
That's what you said.
I don't feel myself,
I just know you're here.
"You must save my soul"-
That's what I want you to hear.
Help me, help!!!
I love you.
I never asked for hell,
I need you!
I don't see no angels,
I don't hear no songs,
I see ugly faces
and I shout:
"I can't take this no more!!!"
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