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Настроение сейчас - омантическое))У Давида (музы моей) скоро день рождения. Немецкий фанклуб решил в качестве подарка сварганить ему книжку, ге будут стихи, проза, фотки и просто поздравления поклонниц. Я решила тоже поучаствовать и написала ему сказку)Думаю, понравится ему... и вам, надеюсь, тоже.
Вот вам на критику английский вариант и русский ПЕРЕВОД. Это действительно перевод, так что русский хуже... да и в английском есть пара ошибок, чего уж лукавить))) но я обещаю попозже все отредактировать, а пока читайте так))
The Heart For Music
Once upon a time in a small Town lived the Music. Everyone loved her and she loved everyone because she was a kind and pleasent Music.
But the time was passing by and people started to change. They had no need in Music any more because they had there business, TV, football and so on and it seemed more interesting for them.
So one day the Music decided to leave the Town where nobody wanted her. She packed all her staff into a small white suitcase, put on her old hat and black-&-white scarf and started her way from the Town.
People in the town were so busy that day that they even didn’t notice the Music leaving. But one Boy did.
He was a shepherd and as he was grazing his sheep on the meadow he saw the Music going away. Boy felt very upset because he loved the Music and didn’t want her to go.
“Oh, she has decided to go so I can’t stop her, – thought the Boy. – But nevertheless I’ll try.”
And he came to the Music and told her: “Oh, Music, please, don’t leave our Town! Without you it will be sad and empty.”
But the Music answered: “I don’t think so. No one needs me here no more. It makes me feel upset but I have to go as people in the Town stoped beliving in me so either I go or I die.”
“Oh, no! I don’t whant you to die and don’t want you to leave as well, – the Boy answered. – Is there something I could do to make you stay alive here?”
“Yes, there is, – the Music said to him. – You can give me something that will give me warmth and help me stay alive.”
“Anything you ask!” – the Boy shouted.
“No, I can’t ask you. You should give it to me as a present.”
“Then, I can give you my jacket. It used to warm me up when it was the Coldest Night of the Year! It will give you warmth and help you stay alive!”
“Your jacket? Hm... yes, it gives you warmth but I need some speciall warmth that your jacket can’t provide.”
“Hm... Then, take my flock! The sheep have very warm hair and when you feel sad they can make you feel better by their bleating. I love them and they love me to. I think they can give you that warmth that you need.”
“Your flock? Well, yes, they give not only simple warmth from their hair but also some special warmth. But it isn’t that what I need, sorry.”
“Oh, Music! Dear Music! But I have nohing else to give you! I’m a very poor shepherd. The only thing that I still have is my heart. Take it, please. I know, it’s not as big as the flock and costs even less than the jacket but it gives me the warmth of the air that I breath, warmth of the dreams that I have and warmth of the life that I live. So take it, I know, this is that what you need.”
“Your heart? – the musik repeated. – Yes, the Heart of the young Boy can give some special warmth that can’t be compared with any other warmth in the world. Its Warmth can make me strong enough to live here. OK, I’ll take your heart.”
And the Boy gave his heart to the Music. But it didn’t stop beating, no. On the contrary it started beating even stronger and louder because the heart is such a thing that it shouldn’t beat for one. And now when the Boy’s heart was beating not only for him but also for the Music it felt much better and became so hot that Boy couldn’t stand it.
“Oh, Music! Please, tell me what’s happenning? I can’t stand this heat in my heart!”
“Yes, I feel the same. Your heart gives too much warmth for two of us now so we should share it with other people. So take your pipe and go to the Town. You will play and I will help you.”
So he did. He took his pipe and went to the center of the Town playing all the way. And those who heard his music stoped all their business at the moment and listened to his play as they were under the spell. “The Music came back to us!” – one Wise Man exclaimed and everyone started to murmur this news to their neighbors.
But the Boy didn’t heare all that because he was happy: his heart was beating cheerfully and the Music was everywhere and she was smiling. There was no need for her to go untill in the Town was the Boy who gave her his heart.
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