everyone sais
лучше - I think so either
I am a very obstinaie person
лучше не if Ithink in another way, а in case Ithink in...
are also about me (а не too)
when i were younger


LI 3.9.25

те конкретно ошибки или весь текст внутри по тексту мона переделать?

LI 3.9.25

About myself.
My name is Inessa. Everyone sis to me during acquaintance: "what a beautiful name!" Yes, I think so either. I don't like when people call me Inna because it's a completely different name.
I was born on 12 January 1988. I am a Capricorn at the horoscope and it explains lots of my acts. For example, I am a very obstinate person. In case I think in some way, it is difficult to over-persuade me. If I want something, I shall achieve the purpose. Taciturnity, gravity, and insistence are also about me.
I live with my mom now. Quarrels were frequently in our family because of my behaviour and character earlier when I were younger. I became older and now I understand the value of my relatives. I have friendly relations with my mum now and I trust her. I can talk with my mom about everything. We know each other in-and-out. My father doesn't live with us already ten years. I have neither brothers nor sisters, but I always wanted to have a twin.
I have a cat. Her name is Anfissa. She lives with us already nine years, therefore we name her a member of our family. I have never thought that cats are so clever. Anfissa understands all what we say, and it is amazing. I am deeply attached to her, in fact we are in the answer for those whom we had tamed.
I can say I am a very different-sided person. I like variety, I like to change everything, but I do not like constancy. I was engaged in dances at musical school for seven years. Our dance-ensemble had name "Surprise." I still remember the times when we all together went by bus at the competitions in Orel and Moscow. It was great. I still like to dance, but I am not engaged in it professionally any more.
I am fond of guitar music. I learned to play the guitar one year and it was not bad.
I also like to listen to the rock-music. It helps me to relax, to be distracted from problems or makes me start to do anything.
Besides I like to walk in the rain. In my opinion, it is very romantic, cheerful, and unusual, especially when you are not alone.


ps моя версия ;)

LI 3.9.25

ой...англ.яз.)))))

девахи жжГут наХ))))) мне говорили, что я тоже так умею)))

"Quarrels were frequently in our family because of my behaviour and character earlier when I were younger."
мне кажется, тут слово "earlier" лишнее)
и
"I became older and now I understand the value of my relatives."
разве можно сказать "the value of my relatives"...?! как минимум, режет слух...

_Curly_Miracle_, здесь правильнее бы сказать "the importance of close relations" - "важность близких отношений с людьми"

Ehri, угу... Ф точку))) ночью мозги уже не работают, а спят)))

_Curly_Miracle_, Ehri, Pantera666,
Тигррёнок, народ, вы не представляется, насколько мне приятно то, что вы для меня сделали!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Я ВАМ ВСЕМ ОЧ-ОЧ БЛАГОДАРНА!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
СПАСИБКИ, СПАСИБКИ, СПАСИБКИ!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Я ВАС ЛЮ!!:)))

Melanie_17, да не за что!;)))

Melanie_17, а я тя обожаюююююю

_Curly_Miracle_, Pantera666, есть за что!!!!!!!!
я вас очень-очень чмок!!!!!!
пасиба, девчонки, что вы есть!!!!!!

не за что ;)

LI 3.9.25

Melanie_17,

_Curly_Miracle_, хих)) *чмоки*

Тигррёнок, есть-есть за что!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!