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My summer vacations.
I have lead a vacation very well. I was in village. Weather was good. We bathed in the river and sunbathed. In the evenings we gathered and walked. I played on a guitar. Then I with mum have gone to Ukraine, to have a rest. We lived in a small small house. Through road there was a sea. We went to bathe. There were very much greater waves. It was very cheerful in them to jump. At coast there were greater hills in which end there was a pool. To go for a drive from them it was very terrible, but I have overcome in myself this fear and went for a drive. We went for a drive on a «banana» and on a «tablet». Us have some times thrown off from a «banana» and have brought on coast. On a «tablet» it was very terrible. There very much greater speed. I have not taken off nearly. In the evenings we went to cafe, at cinema, on discos. I have lead the end of summer in village.
These are my best summer vacations.
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My summer vacations.
I have lead a vacation very well. I was in village. Weather was good. We bathed in the river and sunbathed. In the evenings we gathered and walked. I played on a guitar. Then I with mum have gone to Ukraine, to have a rest. We lived in a small small house. Through road there was a sea. We went to bathe. There were very much greater waves. It was very cheerful in them to jump. At coast there were greater hills in which end there was a pool. To go for a drive from them it was very terrible, but I have overcome in myself this fear and went for a drive. We went for a drive on a «banana» and on a «tablet». Us have some times thrown off from a «banana» and have brought on coast. On a «tablet» it was very terrible. There very much greater speed. I have not taken off nearly. In the evenings we went to cafe, at cinema, on discos. I have lead the end of summer in village.
These are my best summer vacations.
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03-09-2006-19:26
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Вроде всё правильно(но точно я не уверена). Только weather вроде бы всегда пишется с артиклем the(если я ничё не путаю)
Очень много ошибок!!! Вот я написала как надо!
My summer vacation.
I led my vacation very well. I was in a village.The weather was good. We swam and sunbathed in the river. In the evening we gathered and walked. I played on a guitar. Then my mum and I went to the Ukraine to have a rest. We lived in a small house. There was a sea near the road . We went to swim. There were lots of great waves. It was very cheerful to jump in them. On the coast there were large hills and at the еnd of them there was a pool.It was very terrible to go for a drive from them, but I overcame this fear and went for a drive. We went for a drive on a «banana» and on a «tablet». We were thrown off from the «banana» and were brought to the coast. It was very terrible to sit on the «tablet» . There was a great speed here. I wasn't taken off nearly. In the evening we went to the cafe, at the cinema, on the discos. I led the end of the summer in a village.
It was my best summer vacation.
My summer vacation.
I led my vacation very well. I was in a village.The weather was good. We swam and sunbathed in the river. In the evening we gathered and walked. I played on a guitar. Then my mum and I went to the Ukraine to have a rest. We lived in a small house. There was a sea near the road . We went to swim. There were lots of great waves. It was very cheerful to jump in them. On the coast there were large hills and at the еnd of them there was a pool.It was very terrible to go for a drive from them, but I overcame this fear and went for a drive. We went for a drive on a «banana» and on a «tablet». We were thrown off from the «banana» and were brought to the coast. It was very terrible to sit on the «tablet» . There was a great speed here. I wasn't taken off nearly. In the evening we went to the cafe, at the cinema, on the discos. I led the end of the summer in a village.
It was my best summer vacation.
надеюсь,ты получишь хорошую оценку!!Спасибо за симпу!
Я тоже на это надеюсь)И тебе спасибо)))
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