С сегодняшнего дня запускаю новый проект "Художественный перевод" Заключается он в следующем: Я беру какое либо произведение на английском и представляю свой вариант перевода его на русский язык, с чувством с толком и желательно близко к тексту(но это как получится). Первым подопытным будет песня незабвенных Roxette! Сам перевод
Оригинальный текст взято с Rox.net.ru Hey, now honey, You got to face the floor, You headed for the heart But you couldn't find the door, Could you? Could you? Well, I'm standing in the sun But I'm living in the rain, I got to get a whirlin' Like a human hurricane Over you, over you. Now you're looking like a fox on the run. And you're faster than a shot from a gun. I'm pointing at you, oh you. Talking 'bout you, hey you.
I thought we had love in store - You keep on knockin' on every door. Babe, I've seen it all before - You keep on knockin' on every door. Ain't no lovin' you ignore - You keep on knockin' on every door. Keep, keep knock knockin' on every door - You keep on knockin' on every door.
Hey, now honey, Time is all you've spent. You moved into the bed But you couldn't pay the rent. Could you? In the twinkle of an eye you electrify. I got to get a shootin' Like a rocket in the sky, Bye bye, goodbye. Now you're burning like you're hot on the scene. Don't you love to steal a part of my dream? I'm looking at you, oh you. Talking 'bout you, yea you.
I thought we had love in store - You keep on knockin' on every door. Babe, I've seen it all before - You keep on knockin' on every door. Ain't no sugar you ignore - You keep on knockin' on every door. Keep, keep knock knockin' on every door - You keep on knockin' on every door.
I thought we used to have love in store - You keep on knockin' on every door. Hey babe, don't run around here no more - You keep on knockin' on every door. Ain't no sugar you ignore - You keep on knockin' on every door. Keep, keep knock knockin' on every door - You keep on knockin' on every door.
You'd better learn your lesson now...
ЗЫ. Перевод первый так что не обессудьте! Слева машинный перевод, справа мой!!
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