Мне тут учитель сказал что б я в записалась в Poetry Contest а тама топик для поем Earth Day так воть что я накалякала... =) жду критику..пазалста ченить чуть больше чем "хорошии стих"

Remember the time when you’d look at the sky,
And the sun would shine as the day went by.
But where is it now?
Is it gone or did it hide?
And what if I’ve told you
It’s still up in the sky…
You just can’t see it,
‘Cause of pollution that goes by…
Weren’t the trees greener, just a few years ago?
And air was cleaner, and rivers would flow.
The birds would’ve soared across the blue sky.
What has happened to life? Will you let it die?
All the pollutions, leftovers
And what you’ve ignored to pick up
Have been stacking and crawling up!
This mess is pushing the life away
Will you act or let it be this way?
This Earth is our place
It’s for you and for me
Would you want to live in a mess?
Or a place where it’s clean and smell free?
And so I’d say we must keep
This little green planet free.
From all that trash and different debris.
If everyone does their own little bit
The rebirth of life will come with it.
The air will get cleaner,
And water will gain its old glow
The sun will come out
And the beauty will show!
This little planet is cry out for help and need
Will you be the first or last to plant in your seed