Моя новая песня, называется "In a Blur"

Слова песни ниже. Буду просто счастлива узнать, что вы думаете! :)

Lyrics:

In a blur a pair of searching eyes
Were longing for the headlight
The bouncing pain that felt raw
Was on its way making holes inside

I'm on my own replacing dots
Regretting putting them to the wrong spots
Rereading notes, correcting thoughts
And dealing with the desperate hopes
Collecting "wrongs" and saving "rights"
Reloading memories when I felt high
Rebuilding dreams, repairing wings
And praying there will be a song to sing

In a blur a tiny broken heart
Was waiting for the guidance
Confusion overwhelmed little piece of me
When the road was glinting down the line

I'm on my own replacing dots
Regretting putting them to the wrong spots
Rereading notes, correcting thoughts
And dealing with the desperate hopes
Collecting "wrongs" and saving "rights"
Reloading memories when I felt high
Rebuilding dreams, repairing wings
And praying there will be a song to sing

Revival zone was down the road
It had no signs I recognized
I found myself repainting lines
And thinking I could add it to my "rights"

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