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Прекрасное далёко. Английская версия 13-07-2008 21:22 к комментариям - к полной версии - понравилось!


Переводили Kudesnick и Lady_Hellsing

Стих белый, но ритмически верный.


I hear voice is Far from future-fine
Voice morning in silver pleasant dew
I hear voice - and enticive roadway
Makes dizzy, like as a child roundabout

Refrain:
Kindly, pleasant future
Not be to me severely,
 Not be to me severely, don`t cruelly be
Frome a pure origin,
To kindly, pleasant future
To kindly, pleasant future
My way is passes by.


I hear voice is Far from future-fine
It calls me in delightful wonder places
I hear voice - voice asks it is strictly:
And today that for tomorrow have you done?

Refrain

Now I swear, I will become more pure and better
And in a trouble I will never leave my friend
I hear a voice - and I hurry on call sooner
By the path, in which there is not trace

Refrain


А вот еще один вариант, перевод
Zlogrom:

I have heard the voices from bright future
Morning voices in the silver dew
I have heard the voices. Alluring road
Turns my head as carrousel at childhood

Refrain:
Bright future, don't be cruel!
Bright future, don't be cruel!
Bright future, don't be cruel!
Don't be unkind with mine!
From blank and pure creadle
To bright and splendid future
To bright and splendid future
I starting build a line.

I have heard the voices from bright future
It calls me into enchanting side
I have heard the Voices asks me strictly
What I made today for future's bright

Refrain

I swear that I will be pure and kinder
I will never leave a friend when hope wrecks
I have follow the voices I heard quickly
By the road without any tracks

Refrain
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Люблю стихи, особенно на англ.)))) - это моя слабость))))
Как поживаете господин Kudesnick ?)
Kudesnick 14-08-2008-21:49 удалить
^_^ скучно мне, аж жуть.
wtf? Недорогое и мягкое зелёное кресло в марьино. Недорогие международные авиаперевозки в любые страны мира.


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