I'm hiding in my private universe.
I'm losing all the things that hurts.
My soul is a battle ground
For all the sins that you have found.

My life is not a plastic toy
For gods cruelty and joy!
My heart is made of solid gold
To stop the bleading and winter cold.

My private universe
Is made of bricks and stones
They hold the war behind the walls
And keeps together my mind! x2

All the black and yellow pages
Lying hardly through the ages.
In my private universe
All that lies simply burns.

All the ashes and the dust
Covering the rusty locks,
Smoke is making rainy clouds,
Hiding great defaults of skies.

My private universe
Is made of bricks and stones
They hold the war behind the walls
And keeps together my mind! x2

My private universe is closed
My mind is hiding behind these walls.
It's a perfect place for me to stay,
But it's getting dark with every day.

The skies are blind
They start to cry..
They want way out
And so do I..

Молодец,ошибок почти не было. +)
очень красво,хотелось бы услышать с мелодией,думаю,звучать должно супер.)
каменчу здесь,ибо ДД с первого числа не буит работать неделю..))

battleground- ПИШЕТСЯ СЛИТНО!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

я оада как осёл