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As we can see, it is smart, classy, up-to-date room.There is main colour - sandy, so why atmosphere in room is warm, easy.
The room looks like a desert, but a green sofa, flowers, glass table refresh it.The room is very comfortable.here is a lot of light - we can see a sandy colour, lamps, candals and light from the window.So, lighting in the room is very good. There is one more special detail - it is mat seileng, so why the room is can be biggest visual.I tnink there are no unneceserary tnigs in the room.There is all harmonious and sophisticated.
I tnink in room lives a man, who's hobby - is design.I tnink so, because I see - this man knows what he wants and he knows how to do it. A would want room like this.
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нужна помощь:) у меня текст, я описывала комнату, но предпологаю, что там множество ошибок.Поэтому, если у кого-то есть желание помочь, помогите пожалуйста! Укажите на ошибки, помогите исправить:) с меня симпатия:)
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As we can see, it is smart, classy, up-to-date room.There is main colour - sandy, so why atmosphere in room is warm, easy.
The room looks like a desert, but a green sofa, flowers, glass table refresh it.The room is very comfortable.here is a lot of light - we can see a sandy colour, lamps, candals and light from the window.So, lighting in the room is very good. There is one more special detail - it is mat seileng, so why the room is can be biggest visual.I tnink there are no unneceserary tnigs in the room.There is all harmonious and sophisticated.
I tnink in room lives a man, who's hobby - is design.I tnink so, because I see - this man knows what he wants and he knows how to do it. A would want room like this.
Нужно сегодня, жду, СПА-СИ-БО заранее:)
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22-01-2009-21:41
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не претендую на отличное знание английского, но напишу, как по-моему звучало бы лучше.
As we can see the room is smart, classy (stylish, excellent?), up-to-date. The main colour - sandy and that's why the atmosphere in the room is comfortable, easy. Because of colour the room looks like a desert but a (the если картинка перед тобой) green sofa, flowers and a glass table refresh it. To make the room bright there are different sources of light - lamps, candles and, of course, light from the window. There is one more special detail - it is mat ceiling (может был думан потолок?), because of which the room looks visually bigger. I think all the things look suitable here and together look harmonious and sophisticated.
I suppose it is the room of a man whose hobby is design. I think so because there is impression that this man knows what he wants and how to do (reach?) it. I would like to live in a room like this.
As we can see the room is smart, classy (stylish, excellent?), up-to-date. The main colour - sandy and that's why the atmosphere in the room is comfortable, easy. Because of colour the room looks like a desert but a (the если картинка перед тобой) green sofa, flowers and a glass table refresh it. To make the room bright there are different sources of light - lamps, candles and, of course, light from the window. There is one more special detail - it is mat ceiling (может был думан потолок?), because of which the room looks visually bigger. I think all the things look suitable here and together look harmonious and sophisticated.
I suppose it is the room of a man whose hobby is design. I think so because there is impression that this man knows what he wants and how to do (reach?) it. I would like to live in a room like this.
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